KNIGHT and MAIDEN cheering and dancing Person A and B staring
Person B: Hey, what’s going on?
KNIGHT: (Just notices staring kids) Hey, stop gawking at us you gawkers! Where did you come from, anyway?
Person A: We don’t know! We )_________________________( and kind of ended up here!
MAIDEN: Ah! (Turns to Knight with knowing look) It’s one of them transdimensional things again. Too bad, it happens. Well, anyway, this knight here just rescued me from a fire-breathing dragon, so we’re just off to get married now.
Person B: Just like that? Don’t you have to get to know each other first?
KNIGHT: Well, actually we don’t. The wedding itself is optional too, I think, as Saving A Maiden From Dragon automatically grants you her hand in marriage.
Person A: That’s really dumb. Do you even know her name?
KNIGHT: Er…
Person B: This “love at first sight” thing is really over-rated, you know.
MAIDEN: (glares at kids) We don’t have to have names! It’s all part of being )_____(
KNIGHT: (meekly) Um… my name is Walter.
Should I fix/improve/hide-away-in-a-sad-little-file anything? Besides all the stuff that got translated into ?s
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Earlier scene:
KNIGHT and MAIDEN cheering and dancing
Person A and B staring
Person B: Hey, what’s going on?
KNIGHT: (Just notices staring kids) Hey, stop gawking at us you gawkers! Where did you come from, anyway?
Person A: We don’t know! We )_________________________( and kind of ended up here!
MAIDEN: Ah! (Turns to Knight with knowing look) It’s one of them transdimensional things again. Too bad, it happens. Well, anyway, this knight here just rescued me from a fire-breathing dragon, so we’re just off to get married now.
Person B: Just like that? Don’t you have to get to know each other first?
KNIGHT: Well, actually we don’t. The wedding itself is optional too, I think, as Saving A Maiden From Dragon automatically grants you her hand in marriage.
Person A: That’s really dumb. Do you even know her name?
KNIGHT: Er…
Person B: This “love at first sight” thing is really over-rated, you know.
MAIDEN: (glares at kids) We don’t have to have names! It’s all part of being )_____(
KNIGHT: (meekly) Um… my name is Walter.
Should I fix/improve/hide-away-in-a-sad-little-file anything?
Besides all the stuff that got translated into ?s